Friday 8 November 2013

My life is too short

Have you ever sat under a swimming pool for as long as you can?  well that's what’s happening to me, I'm setting under a Swimming pool  with my bubby Newson and lieon they already quit but i'm still going. I been under here for 56 minters now. Ok ill tell you more about myself. First of all I'm from America and half Greek for some reason, My mum say I am but I don’t know how whenever I ask my mum Why she says because of your father and then I say who is my father she repays with this Y.F.I.A.G and I get confused.
Im white and love the sea I mean I could swim when I was only 2 years old but my mum doesn't seem to be surprise. I always bring it up but she just looks at me like I'm a water boy. By the way my name is Nile and Diem for nickname my mum made it up when I was born.

I’m packing my bag to go my friends house he says we are going to the Greek Museum because hes studding on Greek Gods. I don’t know much but I’ll go anyway.
When we got there we went into a room the said some like “THE GODS OF GREEK” we didn’t know how to read it but it translated for me and didn’t for Lieon he’s not Greek may be.
When we got in I saw a man he said he was 145 years old but that was so fake then when I got close he said I was a diem god and everyone looked at me.
He teleport me to this camp and said I was to go there and gave me a ring. I open the ring outside just in case and there I saw it. It was a arrow pointing to the directions of the camp.  

My mum said to follow it with no one behind me.  I did. On the way the world was turning grey and a voice was in my head it said “thankyou” “thats the right path” “swim there” I man pumped out of nowhere and case a fight. What happens next?

The say he’s my father and spots what he was doing. I bash him into a tree close by and run on. Then all of a sudden I was dead.      

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Taniss,

One thing I love about your blog post is that you used inspiration from another story to write your own story.

One thing you could work on next time is checking your punctuation.

Anonymous said...

I liked this story Tanisslous keep up the good work

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